I am so blessed to have brilliant friends that love to read. I just received some great suggestions helping with the flow of my story. Once more, I am reading my novel for editing. Fortunately, I am finding very few spelling and grammar problems. I did however find some of my story a bit choppy, so I asked a dear friend of mine who has published some medical papers to take a look.
Her comment was, "This is really good." And yes, the incredulity was there, thickly. She does not read, "Supernatural stuff."
To say the least, I'm pleased. Her recommendation was simple, skip a line between jumps in action. For example, when your character goes to sleep then wakes up the next morning.
The action may already be in a separate paragraph, but needs more pause. Skipping an extra line between these actions make the story flow more smoothly. So that's what I'm working on right now.
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